I think you should sync the scene transitions with the music a bit more. there is a really obvious down beat in the song, and most of the transitions happen either right before or right after it. having the scene transition on the down beat will make the animation and music much more cohesive. There were also a few blips in the music that you might want to address, for example, the music skips around 40-41 seconds. also check the timing for a few of the scenes, as the sword shining scene seemed far too long and broke the flow a bit. check out how other animations/movies treat those sorts of scenes for reference.
overall, though, not bad for a first animation! interesting in seeing what else you'll come up with in the future!
Thanks alot for the useful tips and advice. I definitely have a lot to keep in mind for my next animation.
this is subpar.
well obviously, you're not a golfer
Great work, everyone! The final product is great! Thanks for the opportunity, Turk(keyOnAStick)!
Thanks for taking advantage of the opportunity!
Have a quality Christmas, Tak(kopako)!
i am a gay man and just played this game to completion(if loops can be complete). O.O
it is very well animated.
Nice dude, thank you for playing!
the play button does not work. that is, like, ASKING for a low score...
cool translation of the original track!
You should definitely do more! this is a really good cover that has a few surprises in it, which is always welcome and refreshing. I would actually love to hear this one live!
You should totally listen to "Right Thru Me" by nicki minaj. that'd make an awesome and interesting rock cover!
I will definitely check into it
So angsty!!! It has EXACTLY the mood that you were going for...
i cant help but to think of your...1206 related incident when i hear it...
It definitely was an interesting experience
this is pretty cool! i see that you have a good amount of highlights here, but no shadows! try getting more values in there and watch out for not only your overall composition, but the things you added to the bottom are drawing focus in a bad way.
Yeah, composition isn't yet my thing. As for values, I agree, i've been doing studies of it lately but i am yet to fully understand the meaning of it. Hopefully, i can make some headway on it.
Thanx again for ur time and review :)
there is a texture here that is making this look like a realllllly low res image. there are brushes that emulate both canvas and oil paint textures, so i would recommend trying to get you effects that way. filters are pretty much gonna devalue the work everytime (there are very few exceptions)
most probably its the filter that is making it look low res (on my attempt to hide my mistakes).i basically used two brushes on this, the chalk and acrylic brushes on gimp.
But lesson learned & will most definitely heed ur advice | i know see this in a whole diff' way.., thnx.
Also another Thanx for taking ur time. Am truly grateful
This turned out really well. while a teensy bit jarring, the horizontal lines were a smart choice, compositionally. they keep my eye moving along the picture plane at all 4 characters, instead of just being stuck on one character.
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